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I growl
I shriek
I pounce
I'm never a treat
I'll tear you to shreds
I'll leave there dead
Gasping for air
With blood splattered every where
I'm a creature that is feared at night
Fear me
I am a demon
It's poem that I wrote during school when I got bored. Isn't happy and joyful? I know right! I have no idea what's wrong with me but I like how it almost has a beat.
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Jerkera Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe I'm just tired, but I can't really find the beat of this poem... ^^;
It's still pretty obvious what it is about, even without the name. :XD:
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
You must be really tired cause alot of people like this poem and love the beat :3


Yes it is XP I can't write happy stuff I'm sorry but I can't
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Jerkera Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Slept now. And now I can find a beat to it. :D
Mind me saying but this is some text that would fit perfectly in a death metal song. :XD:

Ha! I'm bad at the happy stuff myself y'know. I just can't write a really happy story no matter what I do! :D
I should practice my comedy a bit more... :hmm:
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
I know right? ^^ Well after I wrote this I wrote a song :3

aah you do that
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Jerkera Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh you did, did you? SOmething of headbanging-material? :D
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
Yes I did XP Perhaps it is
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Jerkera Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
In that case, maybe you'd like to show it off? ;)
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
BUt I dunno go looking through my notebooks and post on here i'm too lazy XP
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candycammy23 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
it should go:
i gowl
i shiek
i pounch
Im never a treat
Il tear you to shreds
Ill leave YOU there dead
gasping for air
with blood splattered everywhere
Im a creature that is feared night
Fear me
I am a demon OF THE NIGHT

:3 i only added some stuff
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
Aah I see..but not much ^^;
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Sonicfan41 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
Awesome poem
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010
Thanks
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Smoo-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
YAYZ!! More writers i know :D
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
I write all the time!
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Smoo-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
Really?
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Yup
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Smoo-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
:3
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010
Wuppers
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SaliviaBaker Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
how is this DA related?
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
It's art. Art doesn't have to be a pretty picture
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SaliviaBaker Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
I didn't mean that. you put it under the category "deviantArt related" and not "poetry" hence my question.
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Oh, I'm too lazy to do that so yeah
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SaliviaBaker Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
you are too lazy to choose the right category?
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Yup, what's the point? No one is goning to look at it
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SaliviaBaker Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
the category? or the poem?
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
For both
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Angelthehedgehog37 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
its awesomez! X3
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Thanks
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Angelthehedgehog37 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
i like it,it does have a beat into it
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Oh really? It freaked out everyone who read it...I'm working on one with an angel
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Mello-Mihael-Keehl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Amazing althought it is short it makes a pwerful stamtment. I look forward to reading more of your work
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Thanks! I thought it wasn't that good
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Mello-Mihael-Keehl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I like the way that each sentanceis more of a statment. Most poems these days are from an opinion of someone / somthing. This is more, the demon saying what it is, rather that what it thinks of itself.
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I see, I making one about an angel right now
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Mello-Mihael-Keehl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I look forward to reading it. =]
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Yayz!
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Mello-Mihael-Keehl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
So do you write often?
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Yes, poems to stories
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Chloetheicerabbit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It dose have a beat to it, awesome!
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I was completely bored in reading class and this was made
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Chloetheicerabbit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It was born!
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Yes!
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Chloetheicerabbit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
And all i do in class is draw XD
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I draw, write and stare
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Chloetheicerabbit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I fall asleep aswell XD
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MysticWarrior156 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I try not to do that
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