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Draft: Behind the Golden ArrowThe breeze that drifted across the frozen tundra of Haricastisa met my face with a slap. A thick blanket of white and blue surrounded the place that I once called home which was an old black wood tree far older than me. I was always quite fond of the way the fat roots twisted and turned as if it had struggled to acquire a victory against the beasts we called snow and ice. If not for the eyes of a hawk, one would not spot the entrance to an underground world. A world where peace was priority and a single whisper of rebellion resulted with terrible consequences of drastic measures. A better choice of words would be the lovely tribe of Mosquete

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Demon Poem

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I growl
I shriek
I pounce
I'm never a treat
I'll tear you to shreds
I'll leave there dead
Gasping for air
With blood splattered every where
I'm a creature that is feared at night
Fear me
I am a demon
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It's poem that I wrote during school when I got bored. Isn't happy and joyful? I know right! I have no idea what's wrong with me but I like how it almost has a beat.
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~Jerkera Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe I'm just tired, but I can't really find the beat of this poem... ^^;
It's still pretty obvious what it is about, even without the name. :XD:
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~MysticWarrior156 Jul 16, 2011
You must be really tired cause alot of people like this poem and love the beat :3


Yes it is XP I can't write happy stuff I'm sorry but I can't
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~Jerkera Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Slept now. And now I can find a beat to it. :D
Mind me saying but this is some text that would fit perfectly in a death metal song. :XD:

Ha! I'm bad at the happy stuff myself y'know. I just can't write a really happy story no matter what I do! :D
I should practice my comedy a bit more... :hmm:
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~MysticWarrior156 Jul 17, 2011
I know right? ^^ Well after I wrote this I wrote a song :3

aah you do that
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~Jerkera Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh you did, did you? SOmething of headbanging-material? :D
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~MysticWarrior156 Jul 17, 2011
Yes I did XP Perhaps it is
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~Jerkera Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
In that case, maybe you'd like to show it off? ;)
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~MysticWarrior156 Jul 17, 2011
BUt I dunno go looking through my notebooks and post on here i'm too lazy XP
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!candycammy23 Jun 16, 2011
it should go:
i gowl
i shiek
i pounch
Im never a treat
Il tear you to shreds
Ill leave YOU there dead
gasping for air
with blood splattered everywhere
Im a creature that is feared night
Fear me
I am a demon OF THE NIGHT

:3 i only added some stuff
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~MysticWarrior156 Jun 17, 2011
Aah I see..but not much ^^;
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